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Yeah, we discussed that. It was pure accident. The dandelion being the sun - a universal thing - the blood being the wound, corruption, the signal of death.

Yes, Firestarter. I stole it. He knows.

I want it to rhyme in the second one. It'd be pretty, then. I like pretty things. Simple language. niccccccceeeee

*Blinks* No points for me, then.

Hey Brad. I don't like the pauses. Especially how you break the paragraph in between them... But I know you'd hardly care about my opinion. Nice symbolism, but the outsider, ...

Why Jason?

I bump. And I am unashamed

Very simple language for you. I'm no fan of lists either. (I'm aware I'm useless)

Chapter 15 --- I'm turning 15. Hahah

and I could sort of tell from the brush you gave your shoulder that this was only temporary Unclear

Snoink beat me to it.

Sorry, never had a pet. Not one for empathy.

It's gorgeous, but these ending three lines through a lot of odd information at us very quickly. Overwhelming and somewhat confusing. The imagery is astounding, though.

Yes, I was planning on continuing this, but I figured it was too cutesy. Sorry, guys .

Canescent Whatever this was meant to be, it's spelled wrong. I don't like the questions, and the word "neon" could be cut out once. Otherwise - nice rhythm, sharp ending. ...